Wednesday, February 11, 2009

Sentence Re-write

1. Due to the dedication and good work of the company staff, the project is going well. These continued work efforts are enabling the company to reach its goal of becoming a leading example of a team orientated workplace.

2. The demonstrated work of the team would provide further opportunities for the company to develop new business partnerships. One of the main concerns of these potential business partners was that targets were to be achieved whilst working to the set budgets.


3. According to her best friend Susan, her main aims in life were to become a successful writer, be a leader of opinion in the industry and the general community and dine with famous people. In addition, she also wanted to read and recast Chaucer’s “Canterbury Tales” in modern English. She wanted to achieve all this through living a free and generous life.

1 comment:

Toni Purnell said...

Vangel, your writing here reads well.